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sparklemachine
06-20-2006, 04:28 PM
Hello All,
I am a sculptor and just finished putting my work online. I was wondering if any of would like to tell me what you think or help me spread the word.

Thank you in advance to the sculpture community!

The site url is www.sparklemachine.com (http://www.sparklemachine.com)

Cheers!
Marc

Chashab
06-20-2006, 08:51 PM
Well done site, very professional. Had someone do it? or do it yourself?

The work is fascinating too. Love the mixed media. Probably because it's what I'm prone too ;)

Cantab
06-21-2006, 07:04 AM
Marc
Very interesting work - reminds me of some work I've seen at Tate Modern, made up of a series of pieces, each work a kind of collection in itself. I like how the pieces combine to make a single work, each piece part of a larger, perhaps indeterminate, whole. Aesthetically, it is also interesting to see work that does not conform simply to (outdated?) principles of traditional form.
Nice site too - multiple views are good.

Araich
06-21-2006, 08:01 AM
Very slick. Outstanding.

JAZ
06-21-2006, 08:54 AM
Hi neighbor (I'm in Merrimac, MA).
Nice site. Clean,easy to navigate, good typography and the focus is on the artwork. Your payment set up is admirably done because it's clear yet not intrusive. Nice going.
When I tried to click from one page to another at one point I got a timed out error message: server at tracking.clickfinders.com was busy or whatever. One other tiny, tiny thing - on your Purchasing Artwork page, the word "may" in the 4th paragraph should perhaps be "if"? That's pretty nit-picky, but everything should sound as carefully groomed as it looks, right?
Good luck with it.
JAZ

JAZ
06-21-2006, 09:00 AM
I just looked at it again on my husband's computer and the error message happens when you click on the home button in the grey band at the bottom of the page. His timed out too.

sparklemachine
07-07-2006, 04:02 PM
JAz! Thanks for the review and the great feedback! Very nice of you. I will fix the issues you pointed out.

RCFA-Raven
07-08-2006, 08:30 PM
Well done! Interesting concepts. Love the prints.