So it didnt end up being a "David" after all. Its all in the departing.
Well its in the spirit of David so that is just as good--why copy so closely. You just saw more humor along the way than did the original. That is what makes this one interesting--there is more going on--that modern life has more going on is what makes this one possible. The ancient ones could not see as much or express as much. Humor is what makes this one work. I always try to inject humor in my work. Its makes Jack a dull boy if he doesn't laugh at life. Expressive Power creates reality. And you do have a say.
So. Dave is a great name.